tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post3061117575213339477..comments2023-11-30T10:14:32.373-05:00Comments on Susan Cross Writes : Marriage is forever -- #friday flashSusan Crosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-30927154271472786472010-03-02T12:13:33.324-05:002010-03-02T12:13:33.324-05:00It's great to find another FL writer!!
What a...It's great to find another FL writer!!<br /><br />What an interesting plot you've got unfolding here. I feel so sad for the MC and yet so angry at her as well. Well done!MeganRebekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285116194891827858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-74557611280659253272010-02-21T18:47:27.413-05:002010-02-21T18:47:27.413-05:00Good point, Mark. Maybe I should have set it up be...Good point, Mark. Maybe I should have set it up better. Funny, I know people who have gotten married after a few months and had long, happy marriages and some who had known each other for 6 years and gotten divorced after 2. No guarantees.<br /><br />I'll check on the link and see what's wrong. Thanks for the heads up.Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-21838335329224689432010-02-21T16:57:47.031-05:002010-02-21T16:57:47.031-05:00What a nightmare. I have to say though, I'm no...What a nightmare. I have to say though, I'm not sympathetic - getting married to someone you've 'known' for three months - very stupid.<br /><br />Susan, you should know that for the second consecutive week your link from Mad Utopia hasn't worked for me.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-15245458216759965792010-02-21T11:07:53.348-05:002010-02-21T11:07:53.348-05:00Susan, this story made my blood run cold. The titl...Susan, this story made my blood run cold. The title was ominous in itself but I reasoned that it could be happy or sad. Then I read a few paragraphs in and I wasn't sure. The moment the house and who owned it was mentioned I knew something was going to go horribly wrong.<br /><br />Great work in building a sense of foreboding and tension. And interesting characters. I want to know more about them.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-66524556005678148232010-02-20T10:36:30.381-05:002010-02-20T10:36:30.381-05:00The old saying comes to mind - "marry in hast...The old saying comes to mind - "marry in haste, repent at leisure"...<br /><br />I hope she finds the strength (or perhaps the common sense?) to walk awaymazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-45926332866616570652010-02-19T16:52:57.733-05:002010-02-19T16:52:57.733-05:00Thanks for reading. And thanks, Kim for catching m...Thanks for reading. And thanks, Kim for catching my typos. I'm going to correct them right now.Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-23728895835789447682010-02-19T14:15:38.023-05:002010-02-19T14:15:38.023-05:00Michelle's comment reminds me of what's be...Michelle's comment reminds me of what's best about the story--a meek wife who believes that "marriage is forever" as a story unfolds that tells us that she didn't really know him. Any hints on the honeymoon? <br /><br />A couple of small corrections: There's an extra 'got' in the first paragraph and a missing 'h' from hugging, I think.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing your work, Susan.Kim Batchelorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13706206136308395706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-57670097156087593362010-02-18T21:51:34.848-05:002010-02-18T21:51:34.848-05:00ANNULMENT!!!!!
Is she crazy
You've shown her a...ANNULMENT!!!!!<br />Is she crazy<br />You've shown her as such a meek person well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com