tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post2094570087545420198..comments2023-11-30T10:14:32.373-05:00Comments on Susan Cross Writes : Clark as in BarSusan Crosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-9530139634133402682010-05-06T12:09:06.607-04:002010-05-06T12:09:06.607-04:00Oh, Paige, you a too sweet!Oh, Paige, you a too sweet!Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-34297919267937467322010-05-06T11:52:57.003-04:002010-05-06T11:52:57.003-04:00you are such a sugar doll and I have the proof at ...you are such a sugar doll and I have the proof at my place<br /><br />http://paigeofabook.blogspot.com/... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-46112731259603217772010-05-04T15:04:30.525-04:002010-05-04T15:04:30.525-04:00Hi Tomara. I'm glad that feeling came through....Hi Tomara. I'm glad that feeling came through. I'm still experimenting with fiction as I've been writing non-fiction for so long. I have a lot of exploring to do.<br /><br />And Jai, what can I say? My little girls are free and happy. Since I burned my bra I never looked back. How do you ladies walk around in those things? ;-)Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-26237194888699715382010-05-04T13:41:02.930-04:002010-05-04T13:41:02.930-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-68212052820563050272010-05-04T12:56:11.792-04:002010-05-04T12:56:11.792-04:00Susan, you're a cheeky lady. *grin*
My girls ...Susan, you're a cheeky lady. *grin*<br /><br />My girls have nerves of steel. It's my nervous heart that makes them bounce and shiver.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-37571969780163392512010-05-03T22:53:35.812-04:002010-05-03T22:53:35.812-04:00whew... I was holding my breath. I am glad to have...whew... I was holding my breath. I am glad to have been rescued.<br /><br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-60416496576078989802010-05-01T13:31:18.781-04:002010-05-01T13:31:18.781-04:00I don't do a lot of thriller stuff. I actually...I don't do a lot of thriller stuff. I actually met a guy whose name was Clark Graham and that's how he introduced himself. Couldn't resist using it.<br /><br />And hey, you're the one with the bit heart, or at least where it's located! I call them 'my girls.'Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-10918108154940117962010-05-01T13:21:40.038-04:002010-05-01T13:21:40.038-04:00Susan, that was great! My heart was thumping for h...Susan, that was great! My heart was thumping for her when that guy pulled the knife. Then when she was rescued by the other guy I was so relieved!<br /><br />You trying to give me a heart attack, girl?<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-80124936327808268312010-04-30T15:42:44.416-04:002010-04-30T15:42:44.416-04:00Hi Kim, I was going to go a little further with th...Hi Kim, I was going to go a little further with the story but I had 2 different ideas in mind and didn't know which way to take it. Maybe I'll do a follow up one week.<br /><br />Good comment about the first sentence. I agree.Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-51471742307695928542010-04-30T15:36:35.976-04:002010-04-30T15:36:35.976-04:00Interesting set up, Susan. A lot of tension reduce...Interesting set up, Susan. A lot of tension reduced at the end by humor. I'd like to know a little about what happened to Michele and Clark Bar Graham Cracker, even a slight hint.<br /><br />One other suggestion: The first sentence can be easily tightened with the drink "followed by" the water. Just a small tweak. <br /><br />Very frightening scenario.Kim Batchelorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13706206136308395706noreply@blogger.com