tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post8280649226791018479..comments2023-11-30T10:14:32.373-05:00Comments on Susan Cross Writes : The Audition -- #FridayFlashSusan Crosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-70856754766770530142011-01-23T21:30:31.956-05:002011-01-23T21:30:31.956-05:00The was a slight hint early on, indicating that he...The was a slight hint early on, indicating that her hands appeared to someone else, of what might be happening. It was enough to pique the reader's interest.<br /><br />The character's whole physical preparation for her audition, not to mention the audition itself, was beautifully described.<br /><br />Your character's clear view of herself was well conveyed so I came to understand the effort she was making to fulfill her dreams. I also liked that she had a clear understanding of what she could and could not achieve. <br /><br />Hard won knowledge, but not something that prevented taking what paths she could.<br /><br />Very well done.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-54245773656936424342011-01-23T19:01:34.673-05:002011-01-23T19:01:34.673-05:00Thank you. I was a little uncertain about it and d...Thank you. I was a little uncertain about it and didn't know if it came through or was too weak. I appreciate your comment.Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-497169516087803680.post-75829157227030816562011-01-23T16:54:25.952-05:002011-01-23T16:54:25.952-05:00I love the approach you've taken to this story...I love the approach you've taken to this story Susan. I felt I knew her by the end. It shows the long hard slog to achieve a goal. Yet it was very poignant...a slow reveal.<br /><br /><a href="http://flashquake.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">flashquake.com</a>Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.com